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One night, I was on my computer trying to fusion a Glameow and a glaceon but I was having trouble doing so. I was using paint….So far it had Glameow ears and the tail with the glaceon body and head plus the feet. What color should I pick… glameow's color or glaceon's color? Then I got an idea. Why not add not add them both? When I did it… It looks really awful. Why did I pick it? I end up deleting it and redoing… this time I only add the glameow tail… half way though it… I got hungry so I went downstairs and grab a snack plus I check the time… 11:55pm…. Nearly midnight… I should head for bed but I really want to finish the picture! When I got to the computer…. My god! The mouse been moved and the picture… Someone edited! It was beautiful, the dark patch is pink and the eyes were shiny blue.  I want it on my ds... Then I notice something about my ds… it got turn on… I use a rom to play most my game… but the game that got picked was Pokémon soul sliver… I picked my red ds… I didn't want red ds… I really want a blue one… oh well… anyway I went to the menu but the tile… it got change… the title… it say "Hello master". Weird…. I click on it with my red ds pen. When it opened up… the screen is black... Darkness but then some words pop up…
"Hello master~"
My only though "Why is the game keeping saying it?"
Suddenly more words came… like if it read my though
"You did create me~"
More thoughts came… "I didn't make the game…"
"Can't you remember me?"
Now I remember… the ugly picture I made but deleted….
"I changed myself but…."
"But what?" I said to myself…
"Even though you change me, you can't get rid my mission~"
"What mission?!" I yelled at the ds
"Killing everything you know…"
Suddenly a battle appeared….
On the other side was a glaceon, I was shocked the way it looked… It had a purple aura like a spiritomb color… It was nearly normal but the tail… it turns grey and the yes… It was fully but there was an outline…
On the side was black blood coming out… the cry… it sounded sad and angry… also the music was playing was Pokémon Celadon City music  …. But its really creepy… and almost sad… I send out one my loved Pokémon... It was a shiny Mismagius… but I look at the level… what the! The level… its glitches! It keeps changing starting from 1... So far it 30 now… I need to catch it or beat it… now it level 40… I told my Pokémon to use psywave. But a box pop up saying "Mismagius is too scared to attack!" … Please... Attack… the monster... Another message came "But Mismagius use psywave… it missed!"
Don't tell me it too fast…
"Error use blizzard!"
I remember… I never name him a name…
It hit my Pokémon… the hit bar was moving really fast… it hit zero but the message…
"Mismagius has disappeared!"  
I check my team… Where is she?!
What have you done!?
"She is gone forever…" that message came….
No…. So I can't kill it… I have to one my master ball…. I send out my eevee… and went to my bag but I notice something when I went to the poke ball area…
There was a poke ball… on it was a blue stars just like the eyes on the glaceon on my picture… I used it…
1 shakes…
2 shake…
3… shake...
I got it! When it got add to my pokedex... I was shocked what information came…
"You created me but you hated me…. You tried to get rid of me and tried to make a better one… but now you're going to suffer!"

The screen went to name part…
I name it "Amitai"
A message pops up...
"Can you tell me what that name mean?"
I typed in "Truth friend"
Another message came
"What do you mean?"
I said to my ds "I should of keep you and tried to fix you... not leave you alone…"
when I look at the computer… My paint is missing…so I looked down on my ds and check the box… my Pokémon! My beloved Mismagius is back!  I went on amitai … when I look at it… it had copy the glaceon on the paint and on the information it said
"I sorry…"

Never replace….
:iconnightsilverchelly:
I hope there no grammar errors and mistake....

Base of this story:
Don't and try to change your friends

Pokemon go their rightful owner

Edit: I change the music beacuse lavender town music overused
The song i talking about is this: [link]


Yes its a remix however i love it
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:iconderekthevaporeon:
~DerekTheVaporeon Jun 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I liked this pasta a lot. It's nearly like Umbrespeon's, only with different plot.

But make sure you don't use the Lavender Tone next time. It's used way too much. ^^;
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:iconnightsilverchelly:
ok... I might change the town xD
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:iconmewkyuu:
It does look legit, but really, still needs a bit of colouring replacements to do, very easy on Paint.NET.

And the story? Grammar check it once, twice, three times, four times, five times!

But another Eevee? Eevee is ov(ry
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:iconnightsilverchelly:
*Its not eevee, its glaceon = glameow)
(The eevee is in my party xD)
Plus i going try and fix as for the grammar, i know its bad
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:iconmewkyuu:
Oh... sorry about mentioning the Eevee - it was a side thought.
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:iconnightsilverchelly:
xD, I know there so many eevee type story. I guess when you saw the word eevee you though it was one xD
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:iconmewkyuu:
No, not Eevee-type stories, Eevee-type drawings and pictures and fursonas! It's what got me into a still-dragging-on debate on someone else's deviation. :(
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:iconnightsilverchelly:
xD , I know they really common. anyway i wonder what mistake i made but can't spot...
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:iconmewkyuu:
Oh! Can I like, make something, some story, somewhat like this? ... Or not...
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